you must ultimately sympathize with the characters perspective through the narrative. Tell the story as he or she would prefer. Third person but through the eyes of their god. Not just God the writer. Cubby taught me that.
And it's just one simple line after the next. Pace. timing. language. style. grace. that's what Hank said.
and Kill them all. let them all fry. William said.
but have fun. says jack.
hunter said watch the watchers. and don't wait for no one.
and edgar said it's beautiful. no matter ho hideous.
